Melissa Amaral
Melissa Amaral
college admission and essay coaching
In the college admission process, students make high-stakes decisions under enormous uncertainty. Even the most thoughtful, prepared students can wonder whether they are impressive enough or even have a story worth telling.
My role is to help students think clearly, reflect honestly, and move through the process with purpose and perspective, and families navigate the transition without panic or power struggles.
Because I’ve worked on both sides of the admissions process, I know that strong applications are built with time, clarity, and intention. I challenge my students to bring the kind of specific and authentic perspective that actually resonates with admissions readers.
My coaching follows a simple, intentional progression. Using cycles of live meetings and written feedback, we focus on:
Defining: clarifying the experiences, values, and patterns that are worth writing about
Designing: making thoughtful decisions about what to say and how to say it, building a clear narrative throughline across the application
Refining: strengthening clarity, voice, and craft so the writing sounds like the student, not a performance.
The result is work students feel proud to submit and a process that supports confidence, perspective, and steady progress.
Melissa Amaral
I’ve worked in admissions, college advising, and teaching across higher education and nonprofit settings, including Brown University, Princeton University, and Rutgers University.
A.B., Brown University
Ed.M., Rutgers University–New Brunswick
Certificate in Applied Positive Psychology
I work with a limited number of students each year in structured revision cycles that are designed for depth and steady progress.
Each cycle includes:
Written feedback before we meet
A focused live strategy conversation
Clear next steps for drafting and revision
Drafts are submitted in advance. Meetings are for thinking, questioning, and refining.
You’re in the right place if you want a college application process that is thoughtful, grounded, and authentic. I work best with students who are willing to reflect, ask questions, and engage with the process meaningfully and with families who value clarity, perspective, and fit over pressure and prestige.
If most of these statements resonate with you, then we might be a good fit:
You're looking for a calmer, healthier application process that supports learning and reduces stress.
You want an application that reflects who the student is, not who they think colleges want to see.
You want essays that sound like a real person—not a formula.
You're seeking clarity, perspective, and steady progress without pressure or urgency.
You want a process that supports confidence and growth.
You’re looking for guidance that is honest, ethical, and grounded in a real understanding of the admissions landscape.
If you’re seeking quick fixes, heavy-handed editing, or a strategy designed to maximize outcomes at any cost, my approach may not be the right fit.
But if you want a process that supports thoughtful decision-making and honest self-expression, you’re in the right place.
My approach to college applications is reflective, student-centered, and grounded in perspective. I meet students where they are and adapt the process to their pace, needs, and goals. Some students come in with clear ideas and momentum; others need time and space to reflect before anything feels ready to put on the page. Both are welcome.
We begin by defining what matters.
Through guided reflection and live conversation, I help students make sense of their experiences, interests, and values. Before any drafting happens, we look for patterns, questions, and moments that feel meaningful. This clarity becomes the foundation for writing that feels authentic rather than forced. We also consider the audience early on, so students understand who will be reading their work and what the reader is actually looking for.
From there, we design how to communicate it.
Once the core ideas are clear, we shape and outline them, developing a narrative with a clear arc or weaving together multiple examples around a central theme. I offer guidance and feedback that helps students make choices about structure, focus, and emphasis.
Finally, we refine with care.
Refining is about knowing what to keep, what to sharpen, and what to let go. We focus on precision, tone, and flow until the writing is ready to share. The goal is an application that clearly represents the student's strengths, interests, achievements, and values. I want my students to feel confident in and proud of everything they have accomplished.
Above all, working together should feel calm and purposeful. The focus stays on steady progress, perspective, and keeping the process manageable. The goal is not just a strong application but a process that helps students understand themselves better and make decisions with clarity and confidence.
Most Selective/Highly Rejective Colleges
Brown University
Columbia University
Cornell University
Duke University
Harvard University
Johns Hopkins University
MIT
New York University
Northeastern University
Northwestern University
Pomona College
Princeton University
Stanford University
University of California-Berkeley
University of California-Los Angeles
Vanderbilt University
Williams College
Yale University
Highly Selective Colleges
Case Western Reserve University
Emory University
Florida State University
Grinnell College
State University of New York-Binghamton
Tulane University
The University of Tampa
University of California-Santa Barbara
University of Maryland
University of Michigan
University of North Carolina-Chapel Hill
University of Richmond
University of Washington
University of Wisconsin-Madison
Vassar College
Washington & Lee University
Washington University in St. Louis
Selective Colleges
Clarkson University
Coastal Carolina University
College of Charleston
Drexel University
Monmouth University
New Jersey Institute of Technology
Pennsylvania State University
Purdue University
Quinnipiac University
Rensselaer Polytechnic Institute
Roger Williams University
Rutgers University-New Brunswick
Seton Hall University
SUNY College at Geneseo
University of Houston
University of Illinois Urbana-Champaign
University of New Hampshire
University of North Carolina Wilmington
University of Pittsburgh
University of Rhode Island
University of Vermont